Conrad Rice

Call Me When You're Sober- Evanescence

A very interesting story, to be sure. I can't see any grammar problems, but I don't really look for those, so whatever. What I did see was that I had ...

Well, this was an interesting piece to say the least. While I can't say that I understand self-injurers, I can honestly say that I have a lot more sympathy for ...

I don't think that poetry in and of itself is purple prose. You read poetry for beautiful, flowery descriptions and such, so it's excuseable. In fiction writing though, I have ...

I can't really remember when I started writing. I might have been in sixth grade, but I don't really remember. I do remember the first story I "wrote." It was ...

I really don't have a problem either way. I've written stories from both POVs and never had anybody tell me that I got it wrong. However, a lot of my ...

If you could rip this to shreds, I would be very happy.

I was wondering if you could please tear this to pieces for me? Thank you! :)

This was an interesting read. I was getting a lot of Jim Jones imagery when I got to the part where Father Brian passes out poisoned tea. At least it ...

More of my weirdness, ha ha.

Banned for not making your avatar a pencil and asking if we want to see a magic trick.

A really interesting dual perspective piece, J. I'll admit I like it. Once again, as I always say, you have a thing for endings. Although, I have to say that ...

8/10 A very good quote from a good author.

7/10 Butterflies are nice and pretty, I guess.

Interesting story. I liked Ada as a character, I could really connect with her. Julian was crazy/silly, I didn't really know what to think of him. To me, Cole seemed ...